For my last two elevator pitches I was told to provide more information about my product, Give a better introduction, and also explain what I am looking for from the recipient of the speach. I hope I did a better job accentuating these parts in my speech.
Hey Nahel! I really like the way you present your product. You sounded extremely confident while still being conversational. The only suggestion I have is to maybe prop the camera up somewhere so you can use two hands.It is so important to use body language when delivering a pitch. I think it makes you look more confident if it is done right. Overall, great job! Good luck with everything. Here is the link to my own post: http://ckm-ent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/week-10-elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hello- I think this is a fantastic idea! Especially from larges businesses. It's important to keep all receipts in case you get audited. I think a lot of business owners would appreciate this app. I also think you did a very nice job presenting your product, I know its a little difficult talking into a video camera. Overall, well done check out mine:http://basmacirachel.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Great blog post! I really enjoyed watching about your video and learning about your product! The way you spoke about your app was very successful. In the future I would prop the camera up so you don't have to hold it up. Otherwise, I think this was a very good elevator pitch. Furthermore, I think the idea is great! Receipts are a huge waste of paper.
Hey Nahel, I really like this idea. It seems like it could really work and save a lot of people a lot of money. One thing I would recommend for your elevator pitch would be to set up the camera so you're not actually holding it. I think this will make it easier on you and help you remain focused. Feel free to check out my elevator pitch for my app called TextSwap here: http://matthewent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html.
I really enjoyed your blog post. I think your idea is very useful to a large number of people, from the everyday person to large corporations. I think you are doing a very good job at improving your pitch to adjust to the feedback you are receiving. Link to my blog... http://marcocraparottaent3003.blogspot.it/
Hey Nahel, I think you have a really good business idea and I hope that you will one day get it put into action. I could see it being very beneficial and sought by customers. As well I agree with some of the other comments that you should place your phone down on something or use a laptop with a face cam to conduct and film these posts. As well maybe if organized the format of your pitch to better highlight your major points, I think that would help out a lot for delivering your business. Overall I thought this post was good and enjoyed learning about your business.
Hey Nahel. Great idea. Getting a receipt straight to your smartphone is both conveninent for the customer and great for the environment. I felt your pitch was very informative and concise. Seems like you know how to implement it and you have a good idea of what you want to do with the app. Hope to see your idea grow and prosper in the future. Check out my post at http://ahamuf.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html!
Hi Nahel I really enjoyed your blog post.One thing that really stood out to me is how much you took your previous criticism to heart. I think you have a really cool concept and I can't wait to see you polish it up. I think it has a lot of potential for growth. If you get the chance check out my blog: blogapocolypse.blogspot.com
Hey nahel, ive been folllowing your idea for some time now and I think its pretty cool and has some potential. There are already existing services within companies to control receipts and make them electronic. These are like bank of america's ATM's or other places that let you choose whether you want a printed or emailed receipt. I think your idea of storing receipts in an app to look back at for whatever reason is pretty cool. I hope you learn more and wish you luck if you pursue this!
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Hey Nahel!
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you present your product. You sounded extremely confident while still being conversational. The only suggestion I have is to maybe prop the camera up somewhere so you can use two hands.It is so important to use body language when delivering a pitch. I think it makes you look more confident if it is done right. Overall, great job!
Good luck with everything.
Here is the link to my own post: http://ckm-ent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/week-10-elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hello-
ReplyDeleteI think this is a fantastic idea! Especially from larges businesses. It's important to keep all receipts in case you get audited. I think a lot of business owners would appreciate this app. I also think you did a very nice job presenting your product, I know its a little difficult talking into a video camera. Overall, well done check out mine:http://basmacirachel.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Great blog post! I really enjoyed watching about your video and learning about your product! The way you spoke about your app was very successful. In the future I would prop the camera up so you don't have to hold it up. Otherwise, I think this was a very good elevator pitch. Furthermore, I think the idea is great! Receipts are a huge waste of paper.
ReplyDeleteHey Nahel, I really like this idea. It seems like it could really work and save a lot of people a lot of money. One thing I would recommend for your elevator pitch would be to set up the camera so you're not actually holding it. I think this will make it easier on you and help you remain focused. Feel free to check out my elevator pitch for my app called TextSwap here: http://matthewent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your blog post. I think your idea is very useful to a large number of people, from the everyday person to large corporations. I think you are doing a very good job at improving your pitch to adjust to the feedback you are receiving.
ReplyDeleteLink to my blog...
http://marcocraparottaent3003.blogspot.it/
Hey Nahel,
ReplyDeleteI think you have a really good business idea and I hope that you will one day get it put into action. I could see it being very beneficial and sought by customers. As well I agree with some of the other comments that you should place your phone down on something or use a laptop with a face cam to conduct and film these posts. As well maybe if organized the format of your pitch to better highlight your major points, I think that would help out a lot for delivering your business. Overall I thought this post was good and enjoyed learning about your business.
Hey Nahel. Great idea. Getting a receipt straight to your smartphone is both conveninent for the customer and great for the environment. I felt your pitch was very informative and concise. Seems like you know how to implement it and you have a good idea of what you want to do with the app. Hope to see your idea grow and prosper in the future. Check out my post at http://ahamuf.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html!
ReplyDeleteHi Nahel
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your blog post.One thing that really stood out to me is how much you took your previous criticism to heart. I think you have a really cool concept and I can't wait to see you polish it up. I think it has a lot of potential for growth.
If you get the chance check out my blog: blogapocolypse.blogspot.com
Hey nahel, ive been folllowing your idea for some time now and I think its pretty cool and has some potential. There are already existing services within companies to control receipts and make them electronic. These are like bank of america's ATM's or other places that let you choose whether you want a printed or emailed receipt. I think your idea of storing receipts in an app to look back at for whatever reason is pretty cool. I hope you learn more and wish you luck if you pursue this!
ReplyDeleteI didn't complete this assignment but check out my blog!
http://shamelesslylearning.blogspot.com/